Updated Shot List

After the feedback we received from Ms Blackborow, Ms Dymioti and Mr Bayliss (Chris), we changed the overall sequence of events in our opening, and changed the shot list almost entirely:

Summary:

The beginning is more drawn out, so to build suspense. This also focuses more on one character, therefore establishing that she is the protagonist, and does not overload the audience with information. Furthermore, there is more dialogue between the minor character and the protagonist. Our teachers thought that this would add some depth to the character himself as well ass emphasising the location i.e. the high security building.